Feallengod II

Well, the rewrite on Feallengod was shot down. Still not enough of a protagonist, but if the real protagonist is the Trinity, and part of the conflict is that the King seems so distant, what am I supposed to do? The agent compared it to 'Pilgrim's Progress' and called it 'ponderous,' which is either really good or really bad. She said before she liked the writing, so at least it's not that. I do think the rewrite improved it, anyway. So now it's back to sending letters. Tally ho the fox, that miserable wretch.

I think I'll go to the zoo today.